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first draft, Winter Wonderland, 24x18 |
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Second Round |
I started this painting before Christmas. Half way through it I
realized that my drawing was way off and I just had to rework it. In the
first photo you can see that the bottom limb on the forward tree is
just too large. That tree also need to be darker. The figure was not in
the right place for good balance, so I moved him down and over to the
right. The other things that were changed: the mass color of the trees
in the background, widened the opening in the trees in the distance (not
sure that is going to stay that large) and brought in more sky. This is
the point where it was when it was critiqued. Kevin liked how I
incorporated the figure into the trunks of the trees and lamp pole and
darkened the tree that is the main focus. I have worked on it since and
when it gets to a place where I am well pleased with it, I will post the
finished piece.
My idea for this was to keep it simple and to
think of it as a wood block print, with three values: light, medium and
dark with the medium marrying into the dark group (visual approach: Local Tone). In the photo reference there is another figure right in front of this figure, just enough to be confusing, so I removed her. I like the solitary figure in all this snow. I want you to be able to hear the quiet.